Her Face

by Danny   May 7, 2013


A deep, scornful, resentment when i see her face,
How i try to look away.
Though it's impossible to forgive or forget.
We talked but she lead astray
All this because she would not converse face to face
Since she would always fret.

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Hello, still new to pq and i don't know what kind of poetry this is. I did write it but i don't know if it is a haiku its been a long time :). Oh plz leave a comment i want to get better :D.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is not a haiku. A haiku is a 3 line poem that has 5 syllables in the first 7 in the second and 5 in the third. Otherwise it's nice

    • 11 years ago

      by Danny

      Thanks I'll keep posting, and thanks Allhallows Eve I really appreciate it. Thanks for the info. As well Thanks Queen Ashlin and CathyBUtterfly JC i'll keep trying to get better.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is outstanding, so beautiful and the description is wonderful, I love how you wrote it and she is a very lucky lady that's for sure to have her face written about in such beauty and love and passion, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    Oooh DannyKins!!! you can't put that you want comments not kidding dude and the poem is cute!!! BUT idk if you tried hard i know i'm selfish here but i didn't feel it oh i saw it since most of the time i'm like this lol but i couldn't feel it well a tiny tiny part of me did 4/5 from me Dannykins

    Queen Ashlin

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