Comments : Her Face

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    Oooh DannyKins!!! you can't put that you want comments not kidding dude and the poem is cute!!! BUT idk if you tried hard i know i'm selfish here but i didn't feel it oh i saw it since most of the time i'm like this lol but i couldn't feel it well a tiny tiny part of me did 4/5 from me Dannykins

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is outstanding, so beautiful and the description is wonderful, I love how you wrote it and she is a very lucky lady that's for sure to have her face written about in such beauty and love and passion, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is not a haiku. A haiku is a 3 line poem that has 5 syllables in the first 7 in the second and 5 in the third. Otherwise it's nice

    • 11 years ago

      by Danny

      Thanks I'll keep posting, and thanks Allhallows Eve I really appreciate it. Thanks for the info. As well Thanks Queen Ashlin and CathyBUtterfly JC i'll keep trying to get better.