Gothic Love

by Ping Madriago   May 7, 2013


Dig my grave as deep as the wound in my heart
Put a cross and a note that says I died
Leave thirteen black roses and tell him I died for him
Give him this letter, no matter how hard it may seem

"So long. I'm now gone and dead
I'm silently sleeping in this deathbed
Like a statue, my body's incapacitated
It's rotting like a disease that can't be aided

I'll be your sweetest nightmare every night
I'll tuck you to sleep; I'll hug you very tight
Until you cease to catch your breath and be with me
So we'll continue this love story for eternity."

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is sweet and sad all at the same time.

    I like the rhyme in it but in my opinion, if you're doing end rhyme for most of it, you should do it for all of it. Otherwise the flow is a little weird.

    Anyway, I love the romantic part of this. Very beautiful and tragic.

    • 11 years ago

      by Ping Madriago

      Yay, thanks dear. It's a pleasure to hear that from you. I'll surely work on it 'cos at times, I also find it really awkward to read. Hihihi. Thanks!^^

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