Without You

by schmetterling   May 7, 2013


When I'm with you, everything makes sense again.
But when I'm not with you, my thoughts consume me, causing me to swirl down into a feeling of nothingness.
And I can't get back up when you're gone.
So I lay there dying on the cold lifeless ground.
Screaming because that's all I can do without your graceful touch to lift me back up.
I am weak when you aren't around.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is soooo sad and touching, it broke my heart to read this, you put so much emotion into it and described your emotions very well, outstanding poem!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by schmetterling

      Thanks so much! I usually am feeling the emotions I put into poems so that is a strong point in them.

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