Comments : Sharp Bones

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is... Amazing but it's so, so sad. Bullies are horrible and you wrote what happens to a LOT of kids, unfortunately. Nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kris

    This poems is so full of emotion. Mostly pain, You do a great job of putting your feelings into poetry. The way you describe the way your body looks, makes it seem as if the reader is really looking at you. Great writing! Don't stop.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Wow. This is intense. So heart-breaking dear. I love the emotion in this piece is strong and just... I don't know. It's a good poem yet so sad.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Baaahhhh. This makes me sad.
    Being a recovering anorexic/bp subtype ; I totally get this. It's one of the hardest things to overcome.

    Try forming a more positive outlook. :) Things can change, and you'll begin to see yourself clearly.