This is... Amazing but it's so, so sad. Bullies are horrible and you wrote what happens to a LOT of kids, unfortunately. Nicely done. |
by Kris
This poems is so full of emotion. Mostly pain, You do a great job of putting your feelings into poetry. The way you describe the way your body looks, makes it seem as if the reader is really looking at you. Great writing! Don't stop. |
by Kate
Wow. This is intense. So heart-breaking dear. I love the emotion in this piece is strong and just... I don't know. It's a good poem yet so sad. |
by Marcy Lewis
Baaahhhh. This makes me sad. |