Comments : Poetry for her

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    This is beautiful your aunt must be a very special woman.

    She is still here and it is all that matters.
    ^Favorite line by far.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    A beautiful poem Karla for your Auntie

    But the future was already drawn
    without her permission.

    I still wait for a miracle just like those
    we see in books and churches inhabited
    by stone angels

    So deep.

    I feel she has sickness. Love her while you can.

    X

  • 11 years ago

    by Abed

    It's great to see this mixture of reality and abstract poetry. It sounds really original, touchable, because of the mini dialogue, and the creative sentiments showcased. I think it's more of a personal write, and only you know what it is all about. But readers get this feeling that the piece is in memory of your Aunt. Overall, magnificent.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Where to start praising you?

    I believe it is a small masterpiece.
    I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely Karla, Lovely!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    The way you picture your aunt makes me happy for your relationship that bond is a good one awesome poem karla p&l midnight sky