Oh my goodness this is so beautiful and perfect I almost cried, so sweet and heartfelt, blew my mind and stirred up my heart, full of passion and mixed love, OUTSTNADING!!! 100/100

Awh it was beautiful daughter the flow was okay and the story was beautiful i mean i've had my moments where i have written marriage poetry but one single poem about ACTUALLY proposing so it's kinda rare and beautiful good job Raven 5/5

you mommy
Ashlin

It beautiful babe i love it

The poem was never for someone in particular. As my mother said, it is about a proposal. You don't see things like that. It is either a wedding or after the wedding. Never before. This is just my take on that unnerving, beautiful question.