Goodbye

by Sherwin Talapian   May 10, 2013


To you i must say this
last two words of mine.
so please don't cry
don't forget to smile.
memories of you will remain
also this love of mine.
you will never be forgotten
after this last goodbye.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Beautifully written short but good

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    Saying goodbye to someone we love is hard, so true:)
    I think some editting here and there will make it better. But good job, you conveyed your message to the reader well at least for me.

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw...thanks... :) i will make it better next time :) thanks again..

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    This breaks my heart....

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I almost cried when I read this, wonderful poem though, had a lot of emotion and heart that's for sure, outstanding job, hugs!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Slowly Dying

    I love it Sherwin:)!!! It's really good!! Nice job 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw thanks.... your the best friend i ever had.... :)

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