Medics & Perps

by Michael D Nalley   May 10, 2013


The medics washed the blood from the perp's fingers
A heart stopped beating where the rain lingers
It seems there is a warp in time
yet there is reason nor rhyme
as to why a head is facing north east.
An unsolved mystery at the very least.

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    As of right now, it reads okay. But in my opinion it may need a little bit more info to capture more mystery and make it more interesting.

    The part that took me off was where the word "rhyme" came in, I mean at Least to me it look like it was just place there for the sake of continuing the rhyme but it didn't add much to the content. Though, I am just being semi picky, I can understand the way is being used.. But I thought that by just saying there is no reason would have been enough...

    Other than that I thought the starting line was a mysterious one and hence it grabbed my attention.
    My questions are:

    Why are the medics washing blood from the perp and is he/she death? But I think the one death is the one whose heart stop beating... Either the victim or the perp..

    • 11 years ago

      by Michael D Nalley

      This poem was inspired by a youtube debate about the upcoming George Zimmerman trail

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