As of right now, it reads okay. But in my opinion it may need a little bit more info to capture more mystery and make it more interesting.

The part that took me off was where the word "rhyme" came in, I mean at Least to me it look like it was just place there for the sake of continuing the rhyme but it didn't add much to the content. Though, I am just being semi picky, I can understand the way is being used.. But I thought that by just saying there is no reason would have been enough...

Other than that I thought the starting line was a mysterious one and hence it grabbed my attention.
My questions are:

Why are the medics washing blood from the perp and is he/she death? But I think the one death is the one whose heart stop beating... Either the victim or the perp..