Comments : Goodbye

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is so sad, I was trying so hard not to bawl my eyes out as I read it, this is truly sad and a devastating poem, but wonderful writing!

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Awww...thanks so much:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I would avoid the harshness in Goodbye after your poem
    I really like the flow here and the storytelling is good

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    I would avoid the harshness in Goodbye after your poem
    I really like the flow here and the storytelling is good

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Great poem... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Great poem... :)