Comments : I Am Afraid

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is such a poem I can relate to and you mentioned with such wisdom that truth that we must realize, we can't wait for the world, we have to be a part of everything we want to be, and like you said, cherish all the time. I think we all have that fear that we will be taken maybe when it is "time", but that we won't have a legacy. I liked how you talked about having the courage and strength, because those are two things we must find within ourselves, that come from the soul. You have such a simplistic way of writing and it's refreshing, you put out what you feel at the moment and how it relates to your life. Keep writing!