I love poems. They always surprise me.Stunning piece!

First love, then surprise and sadness
this made me Wonder about life, nice work

Reading this piece broke my heart, so easily it put me in the shoes of whoever's experience you were writing from, I only say it that way because a million things can inspire someone not just their own. I'll agree this is stunning, but seems like you were numb or very shallow in the incorporation of emotions in this piece. other than that this is great, the flow is nice and the style was a good choice.