Wow. This piece is really good. I definitely relate. I love the smooth flow and the voice. Great write and strong emotions.

Wow this poem is amazing! it really speaks to me! great poem love :)

Beautiful.

Awesome flow of emotiom

It really is hard when you have to let someone go but depression makes us push people away. I like the startthough simple really does lead into the poem well as it states why. The second stanza is eye opening bbecause it leads into the story with a bomb shell. We never truly know what a person is going through in the depths of our soul. We fight everyday to survive and fighy the demons within ourselves. I love your wording here as it truly does show the battle.

We truly do feel like we die inside ftom the pain we feel. Angony is a great word to portray this. No one truly cares when we fight inside it feels like we are invisible all the time. We always feel like no one can love us with scars inside and out. It truly is a struggle everyday.

We always want to hide from everyone. Its hard to feel or hide from our familywhen they truly don't care. Its impossible to feel loved. Again its hard when friends leave and don't care. We scream out in pain and no one hears us. They leave and live happy lives and we struggle.

Depression does feel us with sorrow and a heart that is so cold cannot be fixed. No matter how hard we try its hard. I love your metaphors though. A heart filled with sorrow cant be fixed easily. In the third line of the last stanza had should be has.

Overall this poem is good hon. Keep the fight going. You are loved 5