Comments : Flickering Night

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Ah, I m finally ending my cliche comment, this time my favorite part was the third stanza where there is the mention of the sea and where the wind blows.

    Theres a ball of light
    It flies around

    ^^ on this line I think theres should be there's.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A nice write where lights of beauty fills the eyes.
    Liked this read and especially the third stanza..good one!

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    This has a very nice dream-like, fantasy feeling to it, with the ball of light (like an orb) and the music and the sky and the sea. Was this inspired by a dream?

    • 11 years ago

      by Robert

      Yes, it was sparked by my imagination, and a dream that I had had.

  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Almost has an hypnotic effect I would say !

    Jolly good poem with a nice rhyming theme!