Most of this poem I was spent getting my mind blown by your word choice, lay-out and terrific writing, wonderful poem, can't wait to read more, you are a very talented writer, don't forget that :) For me the last verse especially stood out, two thumbs up!

I'm captivated. You've caught my heart with this piece, and that's something I didn't expect! Normally, love poems are mushy and cliche, but not this peice! Great, fantastic, amazing. All words I would use to describe this poem!!