The incomplete lullaby...

by Amreen   May 13, 2013


It is late evening-
the sun has embraced dreams
in the cradle of sleep
and a full moon shines
in the deep black sky.

Little Adi returns home
after playing in the fields
and sits under the banyan tree
in his courtyard.
A bright ray of light falls on his face.

He gazes to see
the glowing shimmer of the moon.
Happiness fills his face with a smile
and hope brims his heart
as he thinks of his unfulfilled wish.

And he initiates a conversation.

"O Moon, round and white!
you seem so bright tonight.
I have noticed you ruled the night in variant phases
and to see you complete today
shows your happiness.

I know you were upset for days
that you hid your beauty and grace
behind the curtain of clouds
and not lighten up my little hut since.
But now, you seem to have forgiven me.

So now that we are friends,
Could I ask you for a small help.
But please don't get angry
if it doesn't go for you.
Its just a wish you see.

My dad is a poor mason working in the city
who leaves for work early in the morning
and returns home late at night.
Sadly, I'm not awake to see him come and go.

He uses the village road-
filled with pits and made of uneven stones,
also dangerous insects dwell there,
so it gets late for him to travel back home.

Moon, O Moon, you are so great!
Could you dim your brightness from over my hut
and shine deeply bright at the village road?
Its fine if your light doesnt reach my little house
but let my father come home early tonight.

Then I could meet him and share with him
about my school and my friends,
a lot which I missed to say
since days,
hug him and say 'Daddy' with love.

Moon my friend, fade soon today.
For then I won't be sad that you are angry on me,
rather it would signal you
protecting my father
and fulfilling my promise."

Adi ends his one-way conversation
with the silent Moon
and covers his eyes
but peeps through the gaps in his fingers
towards the Moon.

He then walks toward his hut
and reaching at the door
looks back at the sky
to stare at the round Moon
and winks at it before entering home.

*written for a club activity

Title used : The Child and the Moon

1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a treat that would be a bonus in the pages of a novel

    awesome

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I seen that title and couldn't think of anything to use for it, but o.m.g... you have definitely done it justice! Kind of a "wish upon a star" but to the moon, asking for it to guide light upon the walkway for her father's return home late at night! Such a beautiful story!!

    <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Adi ends his one-way conversation
    with the silent Moon
    and covers his eyes
    but peeps through the gaps in his fingers
    towards the Moon.

    ^^This part is my favorite to see a little child peep at the moon through the gaps of his little fingers...priceless!

    Overall, a heart warming and tender story to read and each stanza was very visual to..just like watching this scene on tv :)

    Beautifully penned!

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Sweetie you're a great poet, I like how you bring your writings to life. This story is so sad, many children go days without seeing their parents due to their parents job. I love this poem, you've touch my heart with this heartfelt tale because this is a reality for many poor families. I absolutely enjoy this read, please keep writing.

    Beautifully written....AL

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    My mind got completely sunk in the story. The descriptive parts in each stanza made me insist to know the end of the poem. You spoke about very important elements necessary for life like trust, hope, fear of the unknown, love and respect between family members and affection between the kid close to a hut and an important element of nature, the moon. Of course it's unique to use the features of the silent but brightning full moon as a special unspoken language by the young kid. This reveals that the moon can hear but can't talk. The kid asked the moon so respectfully and with an endless innocence to shine the village road ratherthan the hut. I think this is called altruism. This revealed how deep is the love relation between the kid and dad.
    Truly insightful message. I loved it and read it twice. You alwayays tell touching stories.
    Keep penning.