by Michael D Nalley May 13, 2013
category :
Life, society /
about society
The informal term "castle" is deprecated |
This poem is really neat, I am intrigue by the way you used the game of chess, to describe a rookie. My favorite lines are the last three, because love can easily turn into hate when someone gets hurt and in the game of chess there's always someone who gets checked. I have read quite a few of your poems, and honestly this one is my fav. |