Comments : Secrets in the Sand

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    I wallow in sorrow
    as I futilely run
    from secrets in the sand
    wiped from the shore
    ^
    that makes me want to cry since it's both beautiful and sad and at times i do run from the truth that stares at me in the face but not another soul knows as i wipe it's trace away from both time and reality i really love this poem i felt a deep sadness and a slight shiver of darkness in this poem very good Raven

    Queen Ashlin