Searching For Home

Now Hannah,
I really think this piece, it had such a poignant story to it, and it reminded me of myself, which through me because when I first read this, I thought it was good, and was pleased that it won the challenge, and remember reading it and thinking "There's something here" but I didn't really know what, and now on reading this again, what I couldn't grasp then, was the story and the imagery, it really did feel like I was within these lines somewhere.

May is one of those months, especially here in the UK, where spring has come but winter still lingers in the air, and while the nature is changing, hearts still feel cold and lost.

Really nice piece, you write so beautifully...

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Incredible write!! This is another master piece of yours. The 1st and 3rd stanza are my favorite. You are always amazing. I can't hide my feelings that you have the ability to pen such brilliant poems. Excellent!!

Very Nicely Hannah!!

I definitely agree with Amreen, you've captured so much and this story. I thought about a woman who may be searching for herself and while she searching for herself falls into heavy drinking and the lust of many arms, but after that phase of her life she realizes that's she has a dream all of her own. Somehow that dream empowers her to look intently toward her future.

This poem can be interpret so many ways, that what makes it so captivating. Hannah I really love this write, great write.

Btw...I've miss you too:)

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This is Amazing!!! Hannah, you captured the essence of the theme so well.

I am at awe with this piece... Love it ! Great! I liked the visual of wine hazed valleys! Terrific!

Keep penning:)