Comments : A Frisky Girl [String Senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Wonderful write, Khalid. I love all the different levels of this woman you describe. So creative, and showing her reaction to what the speaker says is just adorable.

    Love this!

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    LMAO oh gosh this poem is soo true i know i agree with the stanza that says about the cat and seven souls we women AREN'T the most simple but we are sure are there when you need support! :)

    Ashlin

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hahaha, this rocks. Haha.