Comments : Fifth Month

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really really love this!!

    You always manage to master writes with this kind of imagery, this thought process that you make me go through...it brings me comfort...I can get lost in your writes, find solace in detail...you really write with such feeling, such ease, the flow was remarkable...

    I'm fidgeting like a crazy person right now....my fingers are racing along the keys...you just blow me away and make me realise how flipping amazing you are!!!!

    I love this...I really do.
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    But you are the beginning of spring, a time when allergies and perfumes intertwine on the tips of dandelions.

    Your ends are all remnants of winter but I know the summer is coming with your omniscient number: five.

    ^These were my favorite parts, but of course I loved everything about this poem. It's amazing what something so little such as this can mean. So many meanings. Such a great prompt, I can tell it was very thought provoking for you. You put quite the ineresting spin on it though, I for one wouldn't have thought of the polygons.

    I did like how you put the bit about how you're learning to move on and look forward to your future. This part seems personal and adds a bit to the poem I thought because you're graduating and opening a huge new chapter to your life, so I can see how this is like a month of renewal for you. I really did like how it seemed as though you were going to focus on just the month of May but then it turned into the importance of the number itself. You did such a lovely job expanding on it!

    Well done :) Love it.