My Lord

by Cantchangeme   May 17, 2013


I can see now
Glass on tarmac
Glitters like stars in the sky
Panic fills my throat
I pledge my soul to any god that will find it
And die ashamed

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Wow this has a lot of great wording in such a small space. I love the glass and stars metaphor. Your imagery with it is amazing. On the starry night glass does glitter. I love the simple way you talk about dying.And you pray to any gGod to save your soul that was beautiful. The end line was amazing as well because you are saying you regret your life. Outstanding! 5

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