Comments : Scattered Showers

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    First off Im soooo happy to see something new by you^__^

    WOW what a poem, a bit different in what holds but your style is there.
    I love this :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    So, what I interpret from this little piece is that maybe you begin thinking of words in your head, lines here and there to begin a poem... but then tears come and wash it away before it's even began to form into a whole stanza/poem.

    I love the touch of nature you always incorporate, it's your signature.

    Sometimes it takes time to be able to find the right words, they'll come when they're ready and when you truly are. <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    What always captures me when I read your poems, is your tendency and ability to pen my thoughts, dive into my brain and pull out the same things except you manage to get them spot on and write ten times better than me.

    How often I try and write something positive and it comes out negative, how I have a thought yet when I start writing, it loses its ability to come to the surface...instead just spinning about in my brain.

    I just loved this piece, and the simplicity in the complexity of it...so well penned, and as always the nature is just breath taking

    I love you woman!!
    x