Comments : Fiery Jewel

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is beautifully worded. Very intense amount of emotion portrayed beautifully, paralleling the beauty you see in your unnamed queen.
    She is lucky to have such a beautiful poem dedicated to her. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Richly descriptive, although how about this for a better flow, rhyme....

    'My knees grows weak with each kiss, gentle, sweet'