Simply beautiful, as I was reading this I was thinking "why haven't I read this amazing persons poetry yet?!"

I: I think this often, myself. You have an emotional toll that is dragging you down, making you feel aged...as each day drags by, you feel like you are sinking farther into depression.

II: I like the imagery you expressed here, as well as the suspense that "But then..." at the end... it really draws the reader in to want to read more.

III: With the way this is worded, with traveling to 'your home' ... I want to say this is a long distance relationship, meeting for the first time?

I LOVE 'twilight's asphyxiations' and 'cul-de-sac ' you don't see that often, it means dead end, if I'm correct...so that's wonderful. I also adore the mention of the moon hiding her neck, like she was giving you two privacy. So unique and just plain out awesome imagery here!

IV: Again with the mention of three years, I go back to the long distance relationship.

Wind's silhouette <3 in love with this metaphor.

I love the seconds and hours away, it makes the reader where they are heading... where is "the final dance"?

This whole part just radiates happiness and love, how you are content with just holding that persons hand...being with them after so long of not being able to touch them.

V: This breaks my heart. That person decided to return to where he lived, his 'home' but not his 'new home' ... it's thought-provoking, making the reader wonder why they left again.

VI: Depression seeps back in. They haven't contacted you again, and your automatic conclusion is they have found another mate.

"You are a ranger out of my range and I wonder if, you have started the wildfire in my heart, and it is too late for me to heal."

- Such a beautiful, heartbreaking ending. I'm a little speechless and can't think of anything worthy to say here.

Overall, I love this poem! and like I said I'm screaming at myself for not reading your poetry sooner! lol I will be adding you to my favorite authors list and will be back to comment on some more of your work! :)