Cathy...wow. it's got an angry but desperate tone to it. Like your talking to a wall 'cause no one is taking your opinion in to aspect. And then he's leaving and still you can't do anything to stop it. wonderful but sad write.

I can tell the mood behind that poem. I really feel for you coz I know how it feels when the person you love is going far away. It even hurts so much when there's absolutely nothing you can do about it.
It's a great poem!

Sweetie... This heartbreaking. This is well written, and has a tint of anger shadowing the sadness. I love this, and the love you have for him is so obvious it's amazing. Laws shouldn't keep you from being with the one you want.

Wow... very insightful. I can see how you're feeling vividly and this poem makes it so easy to understand that it's practically hurting me inside. Now, that's what I call a great poem. 5/5

The passion expressed in this love poem written so well is outstanding and needs to be on the front page here

A Wonderful Write, Bravo!!!