First stanza: You are being tormented by these demons constantly... can't sleep because of nightmares and can't be awake because of reality. |
by Ares
A beautiful and dark write! It brought me back to my younger days actually; a lot of memories. Poems like these do not get enough credit and this one deserves all the credit in the world! Fantastic choice of words, amazingly crafted lines and solid stanzas. 5/5 ! |
Yeah great Saffie, the first phrase are conjunctive to each other, demon uses fire, you're timing to petrol is relevant. |