by Alexis Anderson May 18, 2013
category :
Life, society /
about society
If given a chance would |
by Ole Carsten
Would you chose to re-do only |
by Mak Wey
I like the content and the conversational manner in which the poem is written. I was a bit thrown off by the punctuation and think that spacing could add gravitas to some of your lines, showing better the transition from questioning to declaration. Personally, I live with regret almost every day. I hope to accept myself as you seem to do here. |