Comments : DO-OVERS

  • 11 years ago

    by Mak Wey

    I like the content and the conversational manner in which the poem is written. I was a bit thrown off by the punctuation and think that spacing could add gravitas to some of your lines, showing better the transition from questioning to declaration. Personally, I live with regret almost every day. I hope to accept myself as you seem to do here.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Would you chose to re-do only
    the wrongs you did.?

    I would never re-do, I would prove a change instead, I like the poem is point over the edge in many ways