Sail (Sequel)

by Meme   May 19, 2013


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A follow up to
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1215388
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My Dearest Admiral,

This letter is now drowning
in my seas, but my pen is
going to sail for the last time
in between these lines.

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You see, I had to ride the
waves of your departure
only to find myself lost in
the middle of your absence.

And believe me I have tried;
Oh I have tried to sail away
from that harbor. But your
winds were so strong, they
kept propelling me to the
verge of insanity
.
.
.
to where it all started.

Standing by the rails of
your ship .. chasing out the
doubts of love I understood
the saltiness of the wind and
the melodies of the sea. I was
swimming in my thoughts while
you sailed yours for my reach.

.. and thats where I found the
final harbor. It's your heart Sir;
your heart was my anchorage!

Until the final sail,
still .. Yours

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  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Meme has once again, penned a marvelous poem; A sequel to carry on the beautiful tail of a woman waiting for her love at sea.

    The tone of old spirited love leaves me seeing a woman standing at the harbor, writing her lover and intentions of bringing him home.

    The gut wrenching heartache of distance between two souls is evident in this piece... She penn's a beautiful ending of true love, waiting for her Admiral to come back to her arms.

    The romance is truly felt from start to finish.. Beautiful, beautiful, piece!! Well Done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Lovelovelovelovelove;
    completely and utterly in love.

    I will leave better comments on BOTH of these soon! I promise.

    Nominated! <3
    added to my favorites, of course.

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Meme-

    You have captured the elegance of this piece, and added a sequel of greatness to a beautiful poem... She would have loved this addition... She also would have wanted this piece nominated, so I did... its breathtaking Meme <3

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you Andrea, this means a lot to me

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Thanks guys :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The first one, was a great write, and when I realised this was the sequel to that I was squealing with excitement :)

    The follow on works well, this was just as smooth and captivating, the imagery and metaphors are absolutely marvellous.

    The tone of a strong love, surviving distance, still being strong, really beautiful and how it can pull you in and keep you there...lovely

    Fantastic penmanship once again, Meme xxx

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