Can almost imagine a werewolf or vampire in lust with its victim here, just before the inevitable occurs !

Another brilliant write, great excitement and passion in your poetry as always and this one is no exception !

Top marks again !

Woah. This is amazing.

I love the lust in it. It really works with the story being told. It adds an innocent element to the "victim" and makes the beast seem stronger, more dominant. I love it.

Beautifully worded