This is a really good idea, even though you got the idea elsewhere, the thoughts are your own, our lives are full of random stuff but it means something to us. In the moment, we need to clear our head, and our rambles can be really powerful.

I myself cannot live without Dr Pepper, if I could have it on tap, that would be awesome, it's the second best thing to alcohol!

And the part about wearing hoodies and sweaters when it's warm, I get that, and that statement itself is powerful, simple but sums up so much.

I really enjoyed reading this, and I always enjoy reading your poetry and writes, always blows me away.

Much love, x

This is quite the interesting concept, I love where you get your ideas! I really could relate to what you were saying about how you'd rather be elsewhere like a big city or something because you've been stuck in your little town all your life, to the point where it seems you know everyone. I can see the maturity here because you wish to go out of your comfort zone and live in a city, do something you've never done. However it did surprise me that you wish to cover yourself up and hide who you've become, you'd think you would want to show the world who you are today. Makes me think a bit!

Even though the Dr. Pepper thing was random, like intended, it was interesting because that's also a part of you, your weakness, it tells us a little quirky fact about you that many may not know.

I do see this as an honest poem though, you did well with it. I'm curious if you continue this what else you have to say :)

I find this tale very interesting, I've always admire those who could be themselves, I find bravery in such ones. I think that we all have little things that makes our lives more meaningful whether it be a can of soda, coffee, or a person or thing. I think this write is neat and I like how you speak of exploring the world outside the state you're in.

Great write....AL