Comments : Memento

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    A broken heart can certainly turn one cold and make them turn to the other side of darkness for a while until they heal.

    I like the ending because it shows remorse, that it's fun on that side until the beast decides it's hungry for broken hearts.

    One little error I'm going to point out:

    "like fun untill you get bitten "

    -untill should be 'until'

    Overall a nice piece with some good vocabulary.