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by Hannah Lizette
A broken heart can certainly turn one cold and make them turn to the other side of darkness for a while until they heal. I like the ending because it shows remorse, that it's fun on that side until the beast decides it's hungry for broken hearts. One little error I'm going to point out: "like fun untill you get bitten " -untill should be 'until' Overall a nice piece with some good vocabulary.