Oooh i really like it and although you have some mistakes i'd captialize the Dac in the poem so it's not mistaken with "dark" and people say you spelled it wrong and there are some spelling errors but overall i really liked it! 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Wow, this is intense, more intense then I imagined, wow, dude you got so much talent and you are expressing it perfectly in this poem, this poem is so dark and depressing and really heart felt!!! and I hope you know that if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here!!! I won't be going anywhere, I am holding my hand out to you!!!