Strong and consise poetry there, Lemon. The beat is slow and the words have a certain eerie ring to them that gave me a slight case of the chills. Well done indeed!

Ares.

This is so beautiful, I love it!!! short but meaningful and sweet!!! Two large thumbs up!!!

I loved this title, as well. You created something very serene and beautiful nature setting yet has that melancholy feeling.

Lovely write!

I like how you wrote it! Great poem! The title is so reative.

I like how you wrote it! Great poem! The title is so reative.