Comments : Rember the pain

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Awwww I love it. It's dark but amazing. Very good job keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wonderful poem, outstanding job, I love how you wrote this, great description and emotion and feeling , two thumbs up!!

    • 11 years ago

      by kaylie

      Thank you so much

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I like your emotions especially in this line
    ^^I can't feel my needs.
    when u can't feel yourself means you can't feel the needs I think, this is wonderful.

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I love how relatable this piece is. So many people read this and feel exactly what you're feeling. Great write.