Only girl who brought tears to me

by Sherwin Talapian   May 22, 2013


Yes i've been a fool
for giving her
this unconditional love.
for loving her
without asking
now im in hurt
so much broken
feel much pain inside.
only girl who made me laugh.
now she made me cry.
the only girl that i love
who turn out to be
the only girl brought tears to me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Crazy!!!!!!me??? sira ka tlaga.........uyh.... umaayos ka...be serious...dont take me as a joke...i might give you a punch...really...haha..peace... serious...
    dont joke at me....really...grrr...sherwin promise..... dont take me as a joke...friends....U-Turn??
    be serious...not me...

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Not me ka pa ... ??? cge pag nakita tayu magawa mo kaya yung sapakin ako ? ahaha :) tignan naten... bakit bwal ba ? wala ka namang bf ah ? wala naman akong gf ? then kung ayaw mo d ok wag nalang... im serious...

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Hahaha...sherwin drama...peace...weeeh...... guys...lol.... you're a PINOY....i dont know what im going to tell...

    of course....most of filipino guys are playboy...hahaha... alot of girlfriends in same time...

    so sorry for that...i dont know if you belong...
    hopefully not...see..if you do... good to see you cry..lol...peace brother....love hurts...when you commit on it seriously.... that's why.... =)

    yan...bumawi ako sa huli ha...peace...ok??

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe... ka sinulat ko lang naman yung gusto kong isulat... saka ou medyo tama ka hindi pa nga lumala yung na xperience ko dito ahaha... pero hindi ako playboy noh... stick to one lang ako sayo :).... thanks sa comment :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is so horribly sad, I'm sorry you have to experience that feeling. Another great write. I agree with Cathy, you deserve the best.

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw... thanks... now i will be on focusing to her with all my life... promise i won't love nobody except on her...

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is so sad, I begin to cry when I read it, you deserve the best girl in the world, I hope you find her!!!!!!! Wonderful poem, you expressed yourself perfectly!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      I found her but she doesn't want me :( yes i deserve so much better :( and i will say goodbye to her tom. and move on to my new life... thanks.

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