by Steven Croat May 22, 2013
category :
Life, society /
other
Everything which we have ever created |
You said a lot in few words (y) |
by Steven Croat
Thank you! |
by Aubrey
I wish i wrote like you...so little words....with a powerful meaning....really good job....5/5 |
by Steven Croat
Thank you! :) |
by Lemon
Lovely poem, I especially love the last 2 lines. Words can be very powerful, often more power than guns and weapons... Words can make someone feel like the happiest person on earth or crush them like a flower. One small issue- the grammar in the first sentence (considering English isn't your first language you're doing very well!) "Everything what we have ever created" I think you mean "Everything which we have ever created". Overall though, I lovet he poem, the short length makes it very effective, good job :) |
by Steven Croat
Thank you for reading!I will correct the grammar problem...thank you for the advice! |
Nothing holds meaning until we create it...a single touch or word can mean the world to us or to someone we love. |
by Steven Croat
Thank you! |
This is powerful and has a very truthful meaning! I love those first two lines.... it's so reflective, everything we do may not have sense or direction to anyone, even ourselves, unless we make it so. We must appreciate and have value for those actions. |
by Steven Croat
Thank you for reading and commenting! I think it like you. |