Very nice!Each line is a wonder!
So great and well written poem!

Beautifully written oh so sad Bec.

Look again at your there/their and to/too

Although you don't hold him now someday you will. I believe this with all my heart. Pain like this never leaves completely it just lessens.

Rebecca,

it is so inspiring to read how you have given this a place in your heart and mind. Sometimes the saddest things happen and still, when you are made out of the right material, you know how to change that into something good and meaningful. A very good poem, sweetheart. I just know that when the time comes for you to have an angel with the ability to stay, you will love it with all your heart:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Rebecca, its a huge loss and u r write people say forget such things coz they hurt.
Bt one cant forget, one who lose can only understand its value.
Bt its gud dat u find a way thru uor poems.
Coz Wen we express wat we feel inside, its mentaly and physicaly gives us strength..

All people deal with things differently but I think most people simply want a little peace of mind and above all, happiness .
I really loved this poem because it reminds me to stay level, there's still some hope or light. Beautiful 5/5

mandy :)