Comments : Butterfly

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Butterflies are beautiful to watch and their colors attract us...liked what you have penned and just wanted to point out some things.

    Slowly your flourishing

    ^^slowly you're/ you are

    as you tourch that flower

    ^^typo: touch

    your fliping your wings-

    ^^you're flipping your wings

    It is good to see you writing more...keep penning..take care :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    Great job, Meena already pointed out the flaws of this work, so I do not need to do so.

    This is a wonderful piece, do write more.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    If only i knew how to edit it so it can be better, i cat seem to find how its done