Comments : Realizing

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow this is a beautiful prayer poem Each line could stand on its own
    Too often I cloud up the meaning of you.
    I not only can relate I love the artistic metaphor to the clouds between heaven and earth. I can tell each stanza was written from the heart of an author that also has a beautiful mind and soul

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is absolutely stunning.

    The first line is just amazing on it's own, I'm in love with it.

    Your faith shines through this piece, your love for Him radiates through each line. You realized that He is the reason for everything you say and do.

    This reads like a prayer and has that personal touch to it, I know it definitely came from the bottom of your heart. Thank you so much for sharing it! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Beautiful! I 'm just wondering... I love this prayer :)