Omg! This was absolutely brilliant! I always love scenes with a payphone and then the mystery of the whole conversation...why are they using payphones, why is he on the run, and who is chasing him...and then of course what happens when the call drops! It lets the reader pretty much create their own story!

Like I said, brilliant! <3

I'm confused by this as the last one. There's nothing I can pull definite conclusions from. Omg.

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Rusheena

^Totally how I feel right now. LOL. ;) With the cliffhanger endings and such, leaving everyone on edge with no answers! I NEED A SEQUEL! Haha. :)

I do love how the reader gets to pretty much create their own storyline with this poem because you don't give any specific details whatsoever about what is going on. Very creative.

Ohhh cliff hanger ending, love to see this is poems but it is very rarely done. I do hate when they do this in the programme though and make you wait until the following week before you find out what happened lol.

Again, this shows great creativity on your part and shows what you can do from a title.

Keep this up.