This is AWESOME! I truly love this bit of dialogue! You really captured the era and 'gangster' vibe with the language! |
by Marcy Lewis
This is very 1920s mob/gangster attitude. You really have a knack for writing crime. This is very suspenseful, and you hear the old-timey sounding anger. It's so Rusheena ;) You have a fantastic style. |
Rusheena, I loved reading this! It was exciting, dangerous and you write crime very well and true to that time....the style definitely had a voice of its own and I could easily picture this scene in my head. If I was watching this in real life I would be frozen and terrified ah....Such a unique write, great challenge :] |
I enjoyed this very much! Really sets the movie, "Bullet casings clinking on the wooden floor. Silence." |
by Rusheena
Thanks, guys :) |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow , I have never read a poem in this form before, taken from a conversation point of view. I think you done amazing in the way of creativity here for the title. Very different indeed and fitting with the theme of SVU. Nice work girl x |