Comments : Chicago Conspiracy

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is AWESOME! I truly love this bit of dialogue! You really captured the era and 'gangster' vibe with the language!

    Lovely piece!!! I'd love to see more! Great idea

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is very 1920s mob/gangster attitude. You really have a knack for writing crime. This is very suspenseful, and you hear the old-timey sounding anger. It's so Rusheena ;) You have a fantastic style.

    This is so cool.

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Rusheena, I loved reading this! It was exciting, dangerous and you write crime very well and true to that time....the style definitely had a voice of its own and I could easily picture this scene in my head. If I was watching this in real life I would be frozen and terrified ah....Such a unique write, great challenge :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    I enjoyed this very much! Really sets the movie, "Bullet casings clinking on the wooden floor. Silence."

    The MOB is perhaps the scariest mankind has to offer.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow , I have never read a poem in this form before, taken from a conversation point of view. I think you done amazing in the way of creativity here for the title. Very different indeed and fitting with the theme of SVU. Nice work girl x