Something to hide

by Kaylee   May 22, 2013


I hide them everday
For I can not say.
The scars on my arms keep multiplying
For reason that I keep denying.
I wish people could began to understand
But if they knew would they like why I keep the blade in my hand.
Sometimes I wish that I could just stop
But then if I did I might just pop!

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    The first thing I see right off the bat in the first line... everday should be everyday but no other flaws I see.

    I know how this feels as well. Its not a great feeling when you have to hide something everyday. I do like your imagery though I can image me own scars and how much they show.

    In the fourth line reason should be reason's.

    We always deny what we feel though because as humans we don't want to feel flawed. It is amazing how much hurt we can take on though. In the fifth line began could be begin. Its amazing that you let your feelings out though.

    Other then the small spelling errors I like this a lot. 5/5
    You are so brave to show your feelings!

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    I know exactly how this feels.

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Love yourself babe....you might dont know you're hurting someone by doing that thing,,,
    (just my opinion)