Comments : Something to hide

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Love yourself babe....you might dont know you're hurting someone by doing that thing,,,
    (just my opinion)

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    I know exactly how this feels.

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    The first thing I see right off the bat in the first line... everday should be everyday but no other flaws I see.

    I know how this feels as well. Its not a great feeling when you have to hide something everyday. I do like your imagery though I can image me own scars and how much they show.

    In the fourth line reason should be reason's.

    We always deny what we feel though because as humans we don't want to feel flawed. It is amazing how much hurt we can take on though. In the fifth line began could be begin. Its amazing that you let your feelings out though.

    Other then the small spelling errors I like this a lot. 5/5
    You are so brave to show your feelings!