by Daylight Lucidity May 23, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The ripples on the water grow larger |
Very Nicely Penned, A Lovely Write!!! |
by Kate
Woah. |
Those last four lines really touched my heart, wow, that is unbelievable, so special and meaningful, I love the metaphors you put in it and the description, it is truly beautiful, outstanding poem!!! |