Nice! The last four verses are my favourite! Very deep!Well written!

Very interesting, I feel like you are speaking telling the story of a woman who have had some bad experiences in past relationship. I also feel that you might be speaking of a woman who has been abuse; although, I am not sure how to interpret this poem, I fine it very interesting.

Nice write....AL

Full of powerful emotions. The range of the emtions adds to the poem. It is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job and keep up the good work :)

A beautiful piece about our Master. He indeed cares for us. He is our only refuge. Great write.