Our summer
by The Poet Behind The Poems May 23, 2013
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Everyday is summer time, even the breeze can't cool down the passion we create.Your smile is all I need my darling, it feeds me; consolidating my hunger for anything else that tempts me. I would bathe in your eyes;Atlantic oceans will never be as deep as the beauty you posses beneath your perfect exterior.The sun will always shine my darling even when our summer, is long gone. |
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11 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Wow T, this is one of your best poems. It flows quite flawless and I enjoyed reading it at such an easy flow and pace.
I do think you should lay it out differently though as it doesn't look as appealing as you normally lay your poems out, but I think it deserves a nice shape to it because it is a beautiful poem.
Very lovey dovey wovey. Why is it not in the love category??? -
11 years agoby L
Atlantic oceans will never be as deep as the the beauty
^^ I think there is a typo, double "the"...
unless it was intended.
I like this poem, it reminded me of,
well I like using the Atlantic ocean lol
and the contrast of cold and warm in the poem was used too well. -
11 years ago
by Rusheena
Oh my stars, Tony! This is so romantic! I feel all mushy now, lol. It's so full of life and energy, and imagery just blows my mind! Such a lifetime of words said in such a short poem, well done! I haven't nominated a poem in a while, but this one definitely gets my vote. Favorited as well. Great job, Tony :)
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11 years ago
by Sourav
Very romantic... very passionate. Wonderful poem.
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11 years ago
This is such a beautiful poem, the thought of someone eyes being so beautiful and deep that you can see yourself in them, just beautiful. When you truly care about someone, there is always a fire raging inside of you while you're with them, I totally can relate.
Lovely....AL
