Your Future...

by Victoria   May 24, 2013


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Your future now awaits,
Fate is in your hands,
You're the Author....who Narrates,
Commander of your lands.

Careful where you lead,
Temptations, always follow,
Never sign any deeds,
Or bite off more than you can swallow.

Make a wise choice,
With each and every turn,
Speak only with your voice,
For, there's alot to learn.

Always strive to do your best,
There are no easy roads,
Just...Life's dangerous quest,
With many, secret, hidden codes.

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  • 11 years ago

    by William Mae

    Life is lived fuller by the warning signs placed by those who traveled it before you. A fantastic poem with caution as a premise but to never the less live life as its instruction. Beautiful write!

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wel written tori.
    A nice optimistic.
    From start to end, evry stanza have d lessons we need to learn.
    Bt Just abt one thing, i wont agree wid u.
    Life isnt a dangerous quest my friend.
    Life is beautiful..one jus needs wings to explore its beauty.

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Well written! I like your rhymes :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Well written! I like your rhymes :)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I love the turn you took on this, fabulous job, I loved the kind of description you used, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

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